I dreamt of an English garden
I dreamt of an English gardentransfigured by the dawn,when the moonlight slept in the hedgesand shadows wrote on the lawn.Roses of untamed beautystood guard of their secrets within,but seduced with...
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This is excellent, Mariposa! I love the images of shadows writing on lawns and the dawn transfiguring the garden.Jared
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Cassia,...***soft sigh....lovely garden of wording. Imagery is like tiny buds in bloom. Rich fields of beauty. ::::clapping::::: Liked this garden it is so sweet with emotion. blessings,Gab Gabriella...
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This is so beautiful Cassia. I do so love gardens and this sounds a real treat. The harp could be called the Welsh national instrument almost, it is played quite a bit here.'Love beauty, it is the...
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Sousse, sousse, sousse,there's so much in this poem about us, I had to read it a few times to get all the meaning, I'm deeply touched by your words, your love is a beautiful thing & I love you the...
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Thank you so very much for your kind words, Jared and Gabriella and Jean. The garden and everything in it is an allegory of a certain person who thinks this poem has too many stanzas.......... The...
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Note- Cassia, edited out the half a page of spaces at the end of the poem (it must have been an ezboard error when you posted it)Matt
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Matt, LIEBLING, so this is "a few stanzas" too long in your opinion? Whistles............. Are you sure its not 8 stanzas too long??? Whistles louder, but much more casually............ AHEM. Well, I...
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Oh, yes, ty for doing this for me, I forgot..............Cassia
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*sigh* leave it to Matt to critique in a NON critique area, on a poem, a very lovely poem I might add, that was written to him ! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great writng Cassia, lovely feel to this one. Lee...
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Thank you Lee, my friend, for backing me up Matts critical eye is never asleep, cant even be lulled with a love poem............ Well, Ill get over it, as he means only well Glad you liked it, its the...
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Wonderful poem Cassia. Beautiful from beginning to end. Congratulations to you on a well deserved win blessings,
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I'm so glad this very lovely poem won Cassia - many congratulations - a very worth winner!'Love beauty, it is the shadow of God on the universe.'-Gabriela Mistral
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Thank you all so very much for your warm words and congratulations!!! Winning after a tie feels to me like there should be two winners though............ So my congrats go to Gabriella for her lovely...
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Yes, i think you're right, Gabriella deserves a HM. I shall fix this....Matt
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Thanks for writing this lovely poem so I could stroll through your garden.scoopDreamSpinnerMyArchive'sNestling's Forums
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